On one cold night it started snowing lightly. It took an hour and a half to go to sleep because I was tangling with exitment! When I woke up it looked like there was a blizerd last night! I scurryed down my breakfast and put on my snow gear and out I went in a flash.
First I rolled a large snowball then a medium ball and a small ball. Then I planted my large ball and picked up my medium ball and placed it on the large one and pated it down. Finaly I picked up my small ball and placed it on the medium ball and patted it down. I then placed extra snow around the bottem of each ball and your done with the body.
Next I gathered some old materials. They were: half a banana, two brooms, three buttons, sunglasses and five toothpicks. Then I took all my materials outside and it took many trip.
Then I put on half the banana point up for the nose. Then I put on the sunglasses and five toothpicks into a smile. Then I put the buttons in a row and placed the two brooms in the medium ball pointing up. Finily I stood back to examine my work then I named it Bob.
Finily I felt like the snowman myself in my wet mittens and damp shoes. I went inside and made some hot chocolate and drank it down fast! Next I took a warm bath. Last I ate my diner and went to bed feeling good about my snowman.
His teacher's comments were: WOW! You did an amazing five paragraph essay! Outstanding organization and details!
I have to agree.
2 comments:
"I felt like a snowman myself" very impressive.
Love it! He is so descriptive, and I love how he has such a sense of humor in his writing at such a young age...
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